范文为教学中作为模范的文章，也常常用来指写作的模板。常常用于文秘写作的参考，也可以作为演讲材料编写前的参考。写范文的时候需要注意什么呢？有哪些格式需要注意呢？下面我给大家整理了一些优秀范文，希望能够帮助到大家，我们一起来看一看吧。
记叙文600字带批注篇一
我的心目中，父亲一直都是顶天立地的英雄，他的胸怀宽阔如大海。
父亲一直都穿着一双布底鞋，白底黑帮，宽宽大大，在大街上来来往往的人群中显得格外刺眼，格外落伍。我曾经笑着问父亲：“你现在已经是响当当的大人物了，怎么还穿这么土的鞋子？”
父亲微笑了许久，没有说一句话。
父亲曾经对我说：“孩子，你别以为现在咱们有钱了，可咱的血管里流的是农村人的血，咱的骨子里要有农村人的那份质朴和忠厚。”
我听着父亲的话，若有所思地点点头。
父亲小的时候，家里很穷，父亲没有好衣服穿，还吃不饱肚子，但是父亲学习很刻苦，肯下功夫，老在班里拿第一名。
在贫困的威胁下，许多孩子都辍学回家去放羊，但父亲的父亲，我的爷爷，一个老实却又坚毅的庄稼人，咬着牙说：“再苦再穷，也要让娃儿上学。”
就这样，爷爷用他宽阔的肩膀和晶莹的汗滴硬是供父亲读完了初中，而家里也因此穷得丁当作响了。父亲，以他农村孩子的吃苦耐劳和憨厚聪明，以全县第一名的好成绩考入了县重点高中。而此时的爷爷心头却升起了一片愁云：“娃儿这么争气，可到县城上学的学费从哪里来？”
爷爷在炕头辗转反侧，他愁了一晚上也没愁出个结果。第二天早上，爷爷沉着脸对父亲说：“今天早晨你跟我去割麦”。懂事的父亲眨了眨眼睛，像明白了什么，二话没说拎起镰*就跟在爷爷身后迈出了院门。
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a hamburg students delegation visited our middle school
it was a morning in the end of march. the fountain was spraying water about 2 meters high. the colored flags were waving in the wind. a blackboard was put at the gate of the school. on it were large chinese characters and german, saying: “wele to our school!” the whole school was set for a gala.
at about 8 o’clock,a modern bus slowly entered the gate and stood in the middle of the drive. acpanied by warm applause,the members of the delegation got off one by one. lead by the school master, they entered the reception room. a simple and short meeting of wele was held. the school master delivered a brief speech. he made an introduction of our school to them, and after that, showed them around the campus. they were greatly surprised at the advanced facilities in our school, such as the puter room, the electronic educational room and audio room.
the visitors were eager to know how the class was conducted here, so they attended a junior english class. in class the teacher and the students cooperated well. no language but english was used. they were amazed to find that our students had such a great interest in english. they also attended a class of german as the second foreign language.
after that we treated the german visitors to lunch. it was very funny that they all wanted to use chopsticks, which they were not accustomed to. they also expressed a great interest in various chinese dishes. while we were eating, some performances were put on. singing and laughing mixed together.
the last activity was a free talk. though language is an obstacle to munication, it did not matter much. if we were not able to express our idea in language, we used gestures. this inconvenience set us thinking about the importance of the mastery to a foreign language-language can be used to strengthen the friendship among the people all over the world.
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lastsunday,i went to guangzhou to visit my uncle and had a good time .
the first day,we got to the airport of zhengzhou and flew to guang
sat down the chair which was near it was found hotel to rest.
the second day,we visited my uncle 、aunt and zhu scene of zhu jiang is very all love there.
the third day,we went to shenzhen by power visited the window of the world.
there are many interesting places of different are happy in it.
finally,we went mum bought four bought a trolley bought nothing because they not fit in me.
this travel tell me:the world is very big!i should thank my grand parents for giving me this time to go to guangzhou,thank you very much!